Script Rough - Not yet Finished

The Last Man Standing.    Swift Getaway Productions

This is the main dialogue scene...the majority of the film is based around an action sequence.

Starring:

Georgie Watson: Jimmy 'JJ' Jones

Joe Haddow: Joseph 'The Bear' Bayter

Ellis Snell: Hernay Kapala 'Ghost'

Ed Stow: Big Eddy

Lawrence Hart: Antonio Frebarro 'Toni'

Jack Barber: Jackie B

plus many more...

Script:

(Ambient discussion) - In the background of the setting.

Narration:

Close up of Eddys name tag, which then pans out to him carrying a tray,wearing a waiters outfit (black suit, bow tie etc.....etc. 

Eddy then turns around to walk across the bar.

Extra: Hey Eddy, get yourself something nice from me.

Extra: Hey watch it! ..oh its you Edd. - Edd is carrying tray of drinks.

(background chatter)

Introduction to each character - Screen shot of each person.

Eddy: Whispers into Jackie B's ear (creates mystery)

Group at the card table (Joseph, Jimmy etc.): Eddy!! Get over here

Joseph: Yeah Eddy can you get us, ehh... just get us the usual ...oh and charge it to my tab.

Jimmy: You're too kind (laughing sarcastically)

Joseph: Ahh quit busting my balls.. (laughing)

Jackie: Stick or Twist Hernay?

Hernay: Ehhh Twist please..

Jackie: Certainly Sir..(laughing)

Hernay: You fucking joker.

Jackie: What you doing Joe?

Joseph: Just sorting my shoe - the camera catches a glimpse of a gun Joe has holstered around his ankle.

Jackie B: So what you doing?

Joe: I'll Stick

Jimmy: Stick? haha Alright there ya blouse   (laughing)

Joe: Haha..you should see my hand

Jackie: And you H?

H: I'm pretty good...so I'll stick.

Jackie: Yeah whatever

Eddy enters with drinks tray.

Hernay: Finally Edd...jeez whats with you today

Edd: Just cant beleive you guys can forget about it so quickly.

Joe: Forget about what?

Jimmy: Yeah What?

Edd: About the Job that we pulled the other day...You know the one that went wrong!

Hernay: Woah..Woah calm down!

Jimmy: Yeah ..lets not make a scene.

Ant enters

Ant: Make a scene..what in this place! Ahhhaaaa (laughing)

Joe: Toni my friend...just how are you doing?

Group: Hey..

Ant: Im good thankyou.

Hernay: Then sit down, have a drink

Ant: You know what...maybe I will. Infact Jackie deal me in.

Jackie: Sure sir

Ant: Please... (reassures Jackie)

Joe: So Toni

Ant: JJ, hows the mrs? (Grinning mysteriously)

Jimmy: Guys,Guys....shes fine ;) (laughing sarcastically, looks around for attention)*group laughs*

Joe: I bet she is!

Hernay: Hey edd, pass me that brandy.

Edd: right away buddy.

Hernay: oh and one of those fine cigars

(Ed passes the cigar over and as hernay creeps up to recieve it the camera catches a gun strapped to his waist)

[Rest of the group Laugh]

Name Change

We have discussed and have decided to change our production company name from 'Pizza Planet Productions'
to 'Swift Getaway'  because it seems more relevant to our chosen genre.

Here are the following titles (members) of Swift Getaway:

Joe Haddow: Director/ Director of photography/Producer
Georgie Watson: Cinematographer/Producer
Ellis Snell: Editor (video)
Ed Stow: Editor (sound)

Company stock will be available soon...

Pizza Planet Productions- Logo Experimentation

Here are 2 ideas that we are considering for our Production company logo. We want the logo to be simple and and easy to read. We think that both of these are suitable candidates. We are going to further experiment by testing some hand drawn ideas..

Pictures

Changes in our project...

We have talked things through as a group and have decided to make some changes in our Film.

The Film is not going to be set in the 'Film Noir' period anymore and has now been revamped and update to the 70s - 80s. We feel as a group that It will be easier this way as we won't have to create an authentic looking 30s restaurant. Instead we have still opted for the same Idea for location and idea just set much later on in history.

Sound and Lighting - Film Project

Diegetic:
Laughter (scattered), glasses clinking, cards shuffling, knifes and forks clinking (all distant and not extremely dominating)

Dialogue - ambient chatting, as well as main narrative.

Non Diegetic:
SFX - Gunshots, Bullets, Flesh Wounds, Kitchen sounds (distant)

Music: Jazz Fussion - played by band. 70s funk/disco is played when shooting starts. We have a list of tracks that we may use. We now just have to choose the most appropriate music.

Characters - Film project by Pizza Planet Productions

Joe Haddow - Joseph ' The Bear' Bayter: Black Suit, Shirt and Tie
He is polite and well dressed. he takes pride in his appearance and presentation. He is part of a strong group of friends

Georgie Watson - Jimmy Jones: Suit and Tie
Quite shy, but at times quite confident. He reacts well to a situation and likes to get the job done. No matter what. He is a key 'player' in the group.

Ellis Snell - Hernay Kapala 'Ghost' -Costume: Black suit, White shirt, Tie
Smart and well dressed. He isn't afraid to speak his mind. He is extremely loyal to his company of friends. Part of the group

Ed Stow - Big Ed - Costume: Waiters Uniform. Bowtie
Very quiet. keeps to him self. If the need arises he can get 'violent'. He works as a waiter at 'The Grey Wolf''

Jack Barber - Jackie B - Costume: A black sweater vest with a white shirt. A tie or bow tie
Calm and cool minded. He dresses very 'suavely' and is a well respected card dealer. He has close connections to the group. He works as the card dealer at 'The Grey Wolf''

Lawrence Hart - Antonio Frebarro- Costume: A black suit and shirt with tie
He is the most confident out of the group. He knows his way around the club, especially the card table. He has a close friendship with Jackie B. He aslo part owns 'The Grey Wolf '

Band - Ash, Alex, Goody, Rigden, Matt- The band are regulars at the club. They have a good relation with Antonio. Costume - Assorted Smart Dress. Suits and shirts